Falling apart...
by Lenee.Roca Jul 28, 2005
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Eyes watering...no tears coming...looking in the mirror what am i becoming...I'm hurting people around me...it's not what i intend...I'm so very confused...is this the end?...people seem to change with the blink of the eye...perhaps it makes you happy...maybe it makes you cry...it;s hard to think anymore...i don't know what to do...we used to be strong...what happened to you...or maybe it's me...what have i done wrong...we would always be together...we would always get along...but things are changing...we're drifting apart...i meant it when i said...your always in my heart...no matter what you say...I'll always love you...each and every day... |
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18 years ago
It is a really good poem... it's kinda of like the poems i write... it expresses all of your emotions, and that is a good thing... i hope you keep writing... nice poem! 5/5
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18 years ago
by MEG!@$%
that was incredible and i can really relate to it. 5/5. good job!
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18 years ago
welldone fantastic poem!! very well written!
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18 years agoby L0KA
This was really good. I see the message you are trying to get across. I would suggest you make this into the form of a poem and not one whole paragraph. It would make it easier to read. However, I thought this was really good. I loved the second last stanza. You did an amazing job on this one. Keep on writing, never stop. Keep your head up and good luck with your friend. Peace. 5/5
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18 years ago
by xXlostXx
dats really good.
beautiful 5/5
- xXlostXx
