You hurt me bad

by XxTeArSxX17   Jul 29, 2005


YOU HURT ME BAD

I though you were true
but to you our friendship was long over do,

I cant believe you did this to me,
I always believed you,
but in the end you always deceived me,

I was true to you but you turned your back on me,
and I always got burned,
I soon hope you get your turn,
but I guess that was a lesson learned,

time has gone and I am still reminiscing on the past,
I cant get it off my mind, pleas don't let this last,
I won't to forget it all,
Let it shatter like glass,

how you hurt me so bad,
I really hope that makes you glad,
you treated me like I was dirt,
you acted like such a jerk,

you did things to me I never thought you would do,
you made me cry and I am wounding why,
you brought me up high, made me feel like I could touch the sky,

Then you let me go, blow me off
and my heart is broke it is your little token,
and now i think I am going to say this to you
good-bye I just can't love

~Ashleigh~

hey i have this on 2 time one in friend ship it's a little diffrent and i have it in love i hope you like it i work really hard on it and have som help thank you musclebound350.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    AMAZING.. I loved it!!! I'm definately adding you to my faves.. Keep up the good work!!! :-)
    Stephanie

  • 18 years ago

    by ~DyingBlackRose~

    great poem. I loved it. 5/5
    ~blackroseblood~

  • 18 years ago

    by gorgeouslilmissy

    really really welldone! ur very talented!
    xx*5/5*

  • 18 years ago

    by lilia

    wow... amazing words. i really can relate. keep it up. and please check out my poem"the things you said"
    thankss....

  • 18 years ago

    by Mat

    the rhythm seemed a little off, and the rhymes seemed a little bit forced, but thats cool because its hard to rhyme well and maintain good emotion. Good job, though, it felt powerful.