What hurtful words will do
by BreakMyWingsAndRun Jul 29, 2005
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She walks down the hall alone with everyone laughing and snickering , because she don't have a home.her parents doesen't care,her brothers and sisters aren't there. she has no friends, she enters contests to get money but she never wins. people tells her she needs to get a makeover in a mean and hateful way, they see the tear drops streaming down her face. it hurts her in her own seperate ways. until one day she ended her life, she did this all with a knife.her parents knows she is dead that is why they both shot there selves in the head, they never cared about her until this day when she realized she really was beautiful in every single way. |
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16 years ago
This is a poem that could be a song and it'd wipe out every other song out there. With this single poem, you could make a movie, a book, a song, an even bigger poem, a play, anything. Just because it's so deep and dang!!! it's emotional! - 5/5!!!!!
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16 years ago
by Christina
Wow that is very sad...but it has great emotion and ryming!
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16 years ago
Wow wow wow i love this one
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16 years ago
by Ben
I love how this poem and the other one I read, just have this realization right when it is just too late. It is almost sad to see how blind the people in the poem were, but maybe as the saying goes "You don't know what you've got 'till it's gone."
Great Job 5/5
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16 years ago
by NearlyCrazy6
I really like the poem. its so sad! i only wish that it wasnt one big stanza..that it was broken up a little. but thats just me. either way, great job!
