You weren't there

by Jacqui Armstrong   Jul 29, 2005


I needed someone to hold me tight
to tell me everything was alright.

But you weren't there.

I needed someone to keep me calm
to keep me out of any harm.

But you weren't there.

I needed someone to keep me sane
to help remove all my pain.

But you weren't there.

Now, you need someone to hold you tight,
to tell you everything's alright.

But I'm gone.

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  • 18 years ago

    by CarissalRADIOFACEl

    ^_^ I've read a few of your poems now... and you keep inspiring me... I honestly think you're an amazing writer and I can't wait to finish this comment so I can read more.

    -Carissa-

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    Wow.. that was so gud.. i lykd how u ended ur piece.. gr8 ending.. and it expresses the emotion ryt.. once agen, gr8 flow and perfect rhyme
    thumbs up
    Nannoush

  • 18 years ago

    by A Heart Losing Hope

    Interesting, very blunt =) i like it, nice work

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Excellent work...so simple yet to the point... you were so strong to let go ... im not : ( !! thanks for your comment ! God bless!!

  • 18 years ago

    by HansRik

    Needless to say, this was a great poem. I liked the repetition of the phrase "But you weren't there" which made it look as though you were complaining to him all the way through, and in the end, you stop being weak and simply disappear to forget him. Nicely done, well developed, and great rhyming couplets. Well done indeed.

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