good poem. 5/5
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hey i reli liked this its quirky and different and sounds great. well dun 5/5 keep writin xxx

awesome poem 5

loved ya rhyme.. wasnt forced or anything.. alwasy good thing to have in a poem! and your last two lines were just i dont know good.. but better.. i know what i mean.. a good way to end a poem i thought anyway!
Take care
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Wow that poem was great! you are a good writer. i loved it! 5/5

Really beautiful