Life and tears

by *rach*and*bee*   Jul 29, 2005


By rach

*trudging through life and tears* rain floods souls beneath lonely stars*silence screams eternity*take my thoughts and murder my heart*may my memory burn in hell*

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  • 18 years ago

    by lee

    Hm...that was pretty good. I liked the part where you put "silence screams eternity. i think that was my favorite line. it kinda has a mystery type of thing going to it. I lk it. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron c s

    short and to the point. great poem. u wrote every emotion down in just a few words. great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by kayla

    WOW THATS THE BEST I'VE READ SINCE I'VE JOINED THIS UR FRICKIN AWSOME!

  • 18 years ago

    by *rach*and*bee*

    hey that's exactly what ur aproval means to me.........you are a very talented writer, i'm just extremely honered to be working with you..i don't think we could ever not get along.........to great freinds
    luv ya babes
    !*!Bee!*!

  • 18 years ago

    by *rach*and*bee*

    thank u! thank u! THANK U!!!
    omg u are such an artist! ur approval means like SO much more than 1000 good ratings!
    hope u don't mind that i featured this one, i thought it kinda portayed both of us.
    thanx for all ur support,
    ur an awesome friend ANd writer
    luv u
    don't forget it
    *rach*

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