What You've Done

by Synyster   Aug 1, 2005


It's what he said
What she said
My soul is dying
I'm becoming dead
My memories bad
But I remember what was told
And All this sh*t
it's getting old
you're lying to me
was it all lies?
it doesn't matter does it?
you don't hear my cries
it's my fault
it was too good to be true
I could never get someone that is like you
but should I really care?
I can't help but to think of you
I think about you night and day
but what I really want
Is for you to go away
Sadly, the thoughts are not erased
Now for life... I'll remember your face
But I don't know what to do
Now I feel as if I love you

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  • 18 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    Very well written! its got what it needs yet again, and i like the title, is eye grabbing!! definately a 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Unfortunately that’s love for you, I have felt the same way many times. This poem was full or true deep emotions. Take Care! Brooke~

  • 18 years ago

    by masked_senses

    that was great girl...Oh and for your comment...i believe in me...

  • 18 years ago

    by Prince Enigma

    Neato poem, sadly, love works that way, with ups and downs..

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    I really like this poem! It's pretty! It stinks though, why you wrote it! 5/5 !!!