by Synyster Feb 16, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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Standing alone in the yard |
by Mr M
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You are a very good writer but you need to break away from the song lyrics thing. It takes away from what you write. |
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Perso Per Sempre |
by Melpomene
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One word beautiful. I loved how you used a different language in a line throughout this poem it definitly gave this something more. Really powerful such strong emotions were portrayed. Well done on this~mel |
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Excellent write...very powerful...good choice of words..n perfect structure..liked the style u used |
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Lost for always? sorry... just wanted to check i got the translation right. |