I saw the truth

by Kelsey   Aug 1, 2005


When I crossed to the other side
I saw the truth
They had lied
There were no pearly gates
No eternal youth
No explanation of the fates
Just endless darkness
One with the earth
Evolving madness
Not a single breath
Not another birth
Only death

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  • 18 years ago

    by bucky

    yes this poem is really good i like it ... i am an atheist myself and this poem i like a lot ... well done 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ

    wow...that may be short but it has a lot of meaning to it...i gave you a 5/5...u deserve it..you are a bery beautiful writer never stop...keep in touch

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    good poem. its short but got right to the point

  • 18 years ago

    by Mrs Reynolds- far from fixed

    yes, thank you for commenting on mine. i like this poem, i can see you have ur own style and its works very well, keep writing.

    well done
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  • 18 years ago

    by I WhoWhatNow

    First I wanted to thank you for reading and commenting my poem, So I decided to read one of yours. I liked it, you have a talent.

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