Confusing and NOT so brilliant!!

by Foresaken_Tears   Aug 1, 2005


Forgiveness unto those
Upon dependence and cruelty
Such have we found And
Eyes unblinking with
Tears running swiftly
Reasoning beyond doubt
Has he
Uncovered lies Are flowing now
He's
...Cold...

OK, at first glance this poem appears 2 be less than interesting. Basically, the aim was to write something which could also be read backwards... I know this is not a work of art but it is my first attempt so please be considerate.
xXxForesakenxXx

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