This feels right

by vanna   Aug 2, 2005


Laying in the cool suroundings
staring at the stars
holding your hand closer
ignoring all the scars

my soul lifting quickly
escaping my warm heart
gazing into his eyes
never wanting to part

forgetting all my worries
everytime you touch my skin
holding my grudge
and secretly letting you back in

she screws with your mind
and you would never know
she keeps her dirty secrets
and never will let you go

these times have been amazing
this being just feels right
now your starting to see me
as i get closer to the light

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