Death come soon!

by Chelsi   Aug 3, 2005


I don't want to live anymore,
what's the sense?
Why should I live if my life feels like hell?
Why should I let other people treat me like sh!t?
I just don't get it,
why live if your going to die anyway?
I know people think I am too young to die,
or think this way,
but I have thought this over many times.
I just wish death would come and take me away.
There is nothing I can do with my life.
It doesn't make sense to live anymore!
Death please come soon, PLEASE!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by skyfox

    Again you have conveyed the emotion so well. Your desparation is so vivid. Death will come all too soon I am sad that you feel this way. There are great things out there for you too.

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    hey...that was really great...but don't rush death b/c it will come when you least expect it. Stay strong girl!
    always-----
    Michelle Cavalier

    p.s. thnx for the comment on my poem it means alot newayz great poem! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    hey i love this...thankyou so much for commenting on my poem..it means so much!! maybe take a look at some of the other ones some time?? i'd love it!!
    take care and hopefully talk soon. x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by ·°_ιηѕаηє аηgєl_°·

    Hey Chelsi,
    i just wanted to say thank you for commenting on one of my poems=)
    this was a really, really good poem.. annd i know what it's like to ask yourself those questions=(
    hopefulli i'll see some more comments from you soon
    |ove d, xx

  • 18 years ago

    by M MEM

    this is good, id appreciate it if you read some of mine

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