this is eye opening and written wonderfully

- excellent poem - well written 5/5

this poem is soo good it has alot of emotion held inside it anyways great job

holly

hey great poem, really sad xxx

love it..i love poems that have short lines..great write..keep up the great work..take care..love tegan xoxo
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Wow! the votes speak for themselves. This poem is awesome. I love the short lines and how it all ties together. Fabulous piece. :)

good job

great stuff! I enjoyed the simplicity

loved it, ! i can totally relate.

omg-i so connect with that. i swear it could almost be written for me. it is so great! no lie. keep up the good work. holla at me when you have a new one.5/5!

Firstly thanks for your comment on my poem

this poem is really well done sweet short n 2the point well done!!

Another great from you!!! i really like the short line poems it gives it a fast pace but you still take everything in...all the emotion behind the words. love your work eager to read more!!!

Common mistake...realiizing the problem too late...this is a good write please continue posting.