Walking Down An Empty Street

by JeBeGood   Aug 3, 2005


I'm walking down an empty street
I don't know where Im going or the things ive left behind
Because Im living in the shadows as the world flies by
Wishing to the world that this silence with subside
On this empty street as I sit and cry

I'm thinking about happiness, but living with the pain
Of my broken world and my smiles took in vain
The horizon is fading and the silence still defeaning
Im praying for laughter but dying for darkness this pain will bring

I'm walking down a different street
But all the buildings look the same
And every day that passes this pain still remains
Because I'm walking down an empty street crying in the rain

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  • 18 years ago

    by fallen angel

    an amazing poem. it was filled with thought. keep writing, i love the style. xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Christa

    I got your request that you wanted people to read your new poems with your new style that you are trying. Well, your poem was good. You just need to make sure it is not too wordy. For example "The horizon is fading and the silence still defeaning
    Praying for laughter but dying for the pain that I am sure the sunlight will bring" The last line has too many syllables it doesn't flow. But, I still think it is a great poem. Keep writing!