Looking back

by JamesP   Aug 3, 2005


Looking back I see your face
And my smile starts to fade
All the things I can't erase
Are Coming back to me
To a time when I knew you
When you were still pure and true
Now all I see is hate
Guess this was my fate

Looking back I see the pain
When the razor brought the rain
In my heart I scream in pain
For what you did to me
All the scars upon my veins
You left with crimson rain
Now ther is no light
Can't I make this right?

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  • 20 years ago

    by Marjan

    Again another great poem by you.
    keep writing your wonderful poems.
    wish you happiness,
    marjan

  • 20 years ago

    by JamesP

    thanks for commenting

  • 20 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    You already made it alright, James. Don't forget the past, but don't relive it, either. Stay strong, buddy... 5/5
    Car

  • 20 years ago

    by bre

    hey this was relly deep!!! i was relly good!!

  • 20 years ago

    by Andrea broken tears

    i loved it
    plz read n comment on mine thnx

    andrea

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