Nice poem. She thought it was expressed beautifully. keep it up. =) oya, she looked looked at ur profile, she likes talking in third person too...
-c@sSY@

Thanks for all the fantastic comments my dear friend. Although it seems only you and Lucy really want to comment on them and absolutly no one wants to vote. hmph. Anyhow great poems.

wow!!! this is sooooooooooooooo beautyful my darling! i love it. this is such a ....its soo.....argh i cant even describe it. and writing is meant to be my talent. bloody hell....oh, are we allowed to swear on here? please dont hurt me. i know, i shall write a poem to show you how much i love it.

as the liquid music elicits my eyes
poiniant beauty appears
reading the depths of darkness cry
the words like plaintive tears

i know i already used the phrase depths of darkness cry, but it seems relevant here. does that show you how much i love it my darling?...now let us see if they will...oh yes, niether the word bloody or hell is technically swearin so there aint nothin they can do about it! (if there is then please dont hurt me. im nice really)
xxx

hello thanks for your comment i like this poem very creative a full of insparation. Thank you for telling me that i made a spelling error. :) keep up the good work

Hey great poem. i loved it. thanks for taking the time to read and comment on mine. i appreciate it lots!! lol. have a nice day. yes...do
-lindsey

Omg that was AWSOME
it's envolving, i dunno how to describe it, excelent job.. excelent is little to decribe it but i have no words right now
i loved this part:

"No star-crossed lovers found each other,
The weeping child had lost its mother,
As fire fought ice, and heaven fought hell,
No wondrous stories I could tell"

5/5 for sure! ure very talented.
if u've got anytime i would love to know what u think about my stuff and how can i improve it ^^

take care.

adios!

pili

Why hello there strange angel, may i say strange is where its at! aanywho;) i enjoyed your poem greatly! so totally awsome! i like ur vocabulary..(as od as that sounds) and thanx for your comment on my poem i thought i could return the favor!...latur days!...she asks if you could read some more of her poetry;)

Wow...unspeakably moving and powerful. I am flattered by your comments. Thank you so much. You write beautifully. I'll have to read more of your poems :)

Eden

I like this one a lot too. and I added you to my favorites as well.

Oh my gosh that was an incredible poem! such amazing descriptions and words, it was brilliant! 5/5,
take care,
xxEmmaxx

Wow, awesome.... really beautiful and touching.... keep it up and thanks for the comment
Polly
(nice profile hehe)

Brilliant wording, dark, captivating

i love it 5/5

-faithfulserenity

LOVE IT!!!!! This is such a passionate and powerful poem. It's really inspirational and gives the reader a real sense of independence. The second stanza's my favourite.