My First Love

by [п]єєснап*томι   Aug 3, 2005


For years I had lost all hope, thought I lost all I had.
Before I met you, all I did was mope (sp?) and cry.
But now that I met you, I'm certainly glad,
You turned my frown upside down, But I still wanna know why?

You brought me back from the dead,
You were my first love.
You were able to bring me out from the dark,
You were my first love.

I had been wondering, wanting to know why you chose me,
You could have chosen the other girls.
Apart from this one question, I'm still very happy,
I feel so happy and alive, my vision swirls.

You brought me back from the dead,
You were my first love.
You were able to bring me out from the dark,
You were my first love.

You brought back the spark in my eyes,
I used to be this lonely wanderer,
But love is strong and fatihful, and never dies,
So I promise not to leave, I will stay with you forvever.

You brought me back from the dead,
You were my first love.
You were able to bring me out from the dark,
You were my first love.
I'll love you with all my heart and soul,
I can only hope that you'll love me the same way I do.
I'll never let go, I'll never forget.
You were my first love.

** hmm.. I guess i'ts ok. Like it? or not? can't really say, but please vote or comment or something. >> *Tomi

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  • 18 years ago

    by GoddessOfWings

    Wow. This poem has both touched and inspired me. It's a shame I haven't felt love yet... I wish I was able to write experienced poems such as this one you have written - and if it is not from experienced... shh... no one knows that ^_~. It's an excellent poem, my friend. I love how you repeated: 'You brought me back from the dead' in the beginning of every 2nd stanza. Very nice touch. It really does bring out the true meaning of love; love makes you feel alive. And you have pointed that out very clearly. 5/5, happy new year... ((for when it arrives in 52 minutes lol.))

    Gurdy x (GoddessOfWings)

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