Comments : Tainted Breath. (Palindrome)

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Thanks Sunny,

    This was my first attempt using this form.

    Warmest regards,

    Steve

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    The style I truly loved. Sad and powerful poem. Just a superb job. hugs, love, Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by Tainted Butterfly

    cool poem

  • 18 years ago

    by AhmadAfaneh

    WOW! nice job i know that i have a rele long way to reach this perfect level in writing.

    Plz read some of my poems n give me some comment abt how i can be like u in writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    wow... amazing!!!! i loooooove it! keep it up.
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Wow, you did a great job with this. Awesome. Good work. xoxo

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

  • 18 years ago

    by paperdoll

    Currently becoming quite a fan of the palindrome.

    That was really excellent. I enjoyed the satisfaction of reading the second half of the poem and watching all the words fall into place. Rather haunting choice of words.

    Thoroughly enjoyable.

    -paperdoll

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    Nice form. Very creative! I loved the title as well. Great job, Steven:)

  • 18 years ago

    by PoeticMystery

    Steve,

    Very creative and well written. I just love all your work. Youre very talented. I love this poem.

    Love,
    Nana

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Well done, wonderful work steve!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by John (Mr. Whuppy)

    Wow steve what a wicked paladrome
    please write more

  • 18 years ago

    by Forsaken Redeemer

    This is an amazing poem/palindrome, u really hav a talent, keep writing.

    xXx

  • 15 years ago

    by maryann

    Wow that was greatttt i loved it=]