Trying To Make Sense Of Everything

by CHOKE   Aug 4, 2005


Dark
alone
angry
and afraid
split between
what's right
and what's wrong
tired of this
things are so complicated
so hard to understand
but still
I try to make it through
screaming
crying
losing
and sometimes winning
but still things are so hard
to comprehend
what's to come of me
and my life
dark
alone
angry
and afraid
trying to
make sense
of everything

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  • 18 years ago

    by Arkon

    I loved how you wrote somethings on one word verses it was so cool.

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Cool poem. The style was unusual. But very nice. The way you repeated words was done very well. Still it was a cool poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    hey thats a great poem! keep writing, and yea life is confusing...but stay strong and keep fighting against it. always-----
    Michelle C

  • 18 years ago

    by Joey P

    I know that feeling to well. Loved ur poem, keep it up.

    Joey.P

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