Comments : Dear child

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    wow, i really liked it..it had a good flow. sometimes its hard to rhyme evey line like you did but good job

  • 18 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Insightful and honest poem. Keep it up!
    -Kate

  • 18 years ago

    by Tainted Butterfly

    I loved this poem..beautiful message behind it. Great job! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Renee

    "Remember to smile, remember to dance"

    I adore that line. Great job. Your poems seem to be the type that I would like to read when I need encouragement or motivation. keep up the good work, and don't change your style. its effective and unique.

    Take Care,
    Renee

  • 18 years ago

    by Kelsey

    Watch the first line but other than that, this is another really good poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by kiesha

    That was very beautifully written. It touched my heart. Keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    'Let time reveal it’s secrets to you one by one' I love that line! good! i like this! the ryming scheme is pretty good