A Lonely Man's Offering

by Michael   Aug 8, 2005



I am a man that know you so well,
but...not even I can’t give you everything.

I can’t give you enormous wealth,
to never running out of money.

Extraordinary or expensive gifts,
that came from the world and back.

Big cars or vans,
to take you whenever you want.

Glamorous or shiny jewelry,
that would be adored by others.

Fashionable diamond rings,
that glimmer with value.

A giant mansion filled with endless room,
and cozy homing.

Nor a giant ship to sail,
across the seas and beyond.

But I can give you this:

I can offer the love of my heart,
for all and eternity.

A great husband,
to love for your life.

An opening for a family,
so that we can give birth to many others.

As well as giving you comfort,
whenever you feel lonely, I will be there.

But the next thing I can give you is something ever so true,
I wish you now and give you this question:
“Will you marry me?”

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  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    well that's certainly different...it's alright for your first love poem...

    "I am a man that know you so well,
    but...not even I can’t give you everything."

    I think it should be:

    "I am a man that knows you so well,
    but...not even I can give you everything."

    I think your other work's much better, but you're trying something new, so that's good....

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Claire*

    That poem was really good..good choice of words..gosh you are a great poem writer..keep it up..I truly loved it..:) Great job!

    xox-*..claire nicholle..*-xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    this is a really really good poem..you really know how to treat a girl by the looks of it:P..and i hope that you do get to use it one day..anyway you really know how to write poems and what to say in them

    Kaylee

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael

    Yah...my first love poem...gonna use it one day...that is if im not rich!

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