I see a body...

by x~broken~angel~x   Aug 8, 2005


I see a body lying
so still on the ground
so cold and so pale
with not one sound

i see a puddle of blood
surrounding the silent figure
the brilliant crimson red
puddle slowly growing bigger

the figure seems to be a girl
with cut and torn wrists
a suicidal girl who went too far
because she wont be missed

a girl who wished to fly
to soar above the trees
to have a pair of wings
and float through the air with ease

i look a little closer
and see with so much shock
that the girl is me
showing as much life as a rock.

I'm dead, i killed myself
and damn proud of it as well
to go to a better place
even if its hell...

~sorry its really stupid but hey... i tried. please comment and ill return the favor~

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  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea broken tears

    i agree with them it was good keep it up and be strong loved the poem

    love ya
    andrea xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by xfAdInGxaWaYx

    It's not stupid at all but really sad that someone could be proud of killing themselves. It's a really powerful piece of work. Very good writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxDarkPrincessLozxXx

    awww steph :'( that was good but so sad...dont ever do it! you promised me!
    Love Loz
    xoxoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by steph

    kewl as poem....xoxoxo

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