exce||ent p0em. we||d0ne.
bri||ant. *5/5* keep up the g00d w0rk
xx

wow i really really liked this one....5/5 great job....luv yas mwah

-kayla-

Wow I was surprised with the ending! My favorite lines "everyone seems so fake not many give, so many take" Well done! Take Care! Brooke~

very good, excellent details!!! 5/5

sad but I like it

very good xox

This was a wonderful poem!! It flowed real well!! Great job! ur style was also awesome!....ne wayz keep up da awesome work! laterz!
~Luvz~
~Chica~

A sad and emotional poem. Some of the descriptions were good too.
However the rhyming seemed forced and didn't flow. Not all poems have to rhyme you know.
Keep writing.

Very good poem.keep up the good work

Another wonderful poem by you. I am awed by your talent. The only thing that I would improve, again, capitalisation of the "I", and perhaps some punctuation towards the end. Otherwise, the poem is fantastic: excellent diction, powerful emotions, and excellent imagery. Excellent poem! 5/5 like the other one. Keep it up!

Very good,very impressive i'm going to read more of your poems 5/5

Wow... if i did kill myself i'd leave behing a note pretty much like this
amazing
5/5

Oh wow. very sad, the ending surprised me the most, anywho excellent poem.

O sooo sad. ur a great poet keep writting. 5/5

This is very sad. I hope your doing okay because it's pretty scary how you'll be in heaven and your looking down at him and he's look up at you. I mean Wow!! anyway good job. Just a question because i'm stupid and stuff what does sleuth mean anyway? sorry i usely don't use big words like that i don't know in my poems so yeah. But anyway good job. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

Wow!! nicely written! i enjoyed it! the flow was awesome and I like the idea of rhyming every 2 lines!! 5/5 fo r sure!

Everyone seems so fake
not many give, so many take

that was a really cool little saying you got there...very neat

for example 4th stanza the syllables are off balance which makes it like choppy as i thought were some other parts in this poem all in all though great job 4/5

Not too bad at all...this is certainly my type of poem. It was nicely written, flowing very nicely. Good job.

Forever I Remain,
Sheena

Awesome...Better then the other...Good Job..
5/5
Ash

Loved the poem. 5/5 But please capitalise your I's