Only Me

by Angel   Aug 10, 2005


I close the door
The world is gone
My path is clear
and i am alone
No more passengers on board
This road i must travel solo
I do not know where it started
I do not know where it will end

But i will carry on
Trying not to look back
Avoiding the holes
And skipping the cracks
I will take the risks
And will play it safe
Because where i am going
There is no return!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Nice piece, but I wanted more! I think you could still expand on this poem and it will become even more awesome!

    Warmest regards,

    Steve

  • 18 years ago

    by Ben

    hey, nice work. i think there could be some improvments, like if you went into a little more depth about your feelings, and the path you have left behind, and the path you are walking (and the path infront of you) also a little more on your feelings, i think would have been good, but i really like this none the less.

    i hope you dont mind my ideas - if you dont like them then dont listen lol.
    thanx a heap
    bye bye
    Ben

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