True Feelings

by Little Star MB   Aug 11, 2005


When I look into your eyes I see the pain
Of something lost and nothing gained
What was so bad that you had to let go?
I wish I could hold you and let you know.

What our friendship was it always will be
The smile on your face was enough for me
To see you walk by and not say hi
I have to tell you that it hurts me inside.

You sheltered me from the cold
With words of wisdom sweetly told
You warm my heart with just one smile
Making life seem all worth while.

If things were different
Where would we be?
Would I have even met you?
And would I be free?

What lies ahead I do not know
For fate will show us where to go
I just wanted to tell you how I feel
And maybe one day this dream will be real.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tisha

    Thats an awesome poem,GREAT WORK...keep it up!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Liz

    Thats such a nice poem..It had a great flow and good rhyming scheme aswell..

  • 18 years ago

    by *~*Gina*~*

    Great Poem. Well written, Nice Job
    ~Smile Always~
    Gina

  • 18 years ago

    by Pieces of My Soul

    LOL But that's ok I can feel the emotion comig through the words. I evisioned this poems while I was reading it. This poems is truely worth a 5/5. I also have poems of my own, that I would be glad if you rate and comment on them of you have time. "Only You" is one of my widely seem poems, but if you could check out "Only You" and my others ones, I would be thankful. Thanx alot, and keep up the great work!

    -Frank :D

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Star MB

    Ha ha oops posted the comment on my own poem -- oops sorry that comment was for another poem lol.

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