I love her...I hate him...

by Poetic Tragedy08   Aug 11, 2005


Him-
She's my soul
She's my heart
She's what gave me
My loving start

I would do anything
To get her love
From the father
Sent from above

I can't live without
My mind was a blur
But she's made it clear
I LOVE HER

Her-
He's ruined me
I can't stand
Never again
Will I touch his hand

He's stolen my
Most precious possession
With me some people say
He has an obsession

He came in
Made life dim
I want him out
I HATE HIM

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  • 18 years ago

    by Synyster

    Very original poem. I like how you had the story told from both points of view. Too bad she didn't return his affection. Awesome, Travis.

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    this is a very true poem, I loved how you gave both points because most loves poems only ahve one.

    the only part I was confused about was this
    "I can't live without"

    can't live without what?
    "I can't live without her"

    was it supposed to be something like that?

    x)

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Britty~Nloveღ

    omg i loved this poem!!! i like how it shows boths sides!!!! great writting keep it up!!! really cool poems!!!
    ~Lotta luv~
    ~Britty~

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