Look

by xEmmax   Aug 13, 2005


Look at those scars
they map out the pain
the blood takes the feelings
but the marks still remain

Look at her wrists
the patterns which swirl
the inner torment
was too much for this girl

Look at her face
the eyes you won't meet
a smile no longer
could make it complete

Look at her path
through darker days
it keeps to the shadows
a complex maze

Look in her mind
explore foreign lands
the pain and the feelings
only she understands

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  • 18 years ago

    by Matters

    Wow, that was so sad yet beautiful. Fabulous meaning, and great description what it's like inside a cutter's head. All of your poems are really just... fantastic. I am awestruck on them all. I love this one. I can kind of relate, too... I just found out my girlfriend cut... it was pretty bad. Anyways, great job. Trust me, you're staying in my favorites!

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  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Haha thanku guys! luv u xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Stabbylou

    HAMMER - TO ROCK SO HARD SHOULD BE ILLEGAL

  • 18 years ago

    by my_little_secret

    I like it, and the rhymings getting better as well. Wish i could make it all better for u tho hammer x

  • 18 years ago

    by Razorblade_romance666

    my arm is more like a random spot were the x's are it is kinda like a make i like the meaning of ur poem i understand wat u mean and stuff so keep it up the writing i mean

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