Black rose

by Tim   Aug 15, 2005


Light shines upon this rose
Showing its true colors
Symbolizing a love that’s true
Like the love I had for you

Into darkness light will fade
True love lost along the way
Thoughts of you will stay with me
I am lost in this misery

Roses fade from red to black
Loose its life and wilt away
No one here to keep me alive
Die alone and then you will see

Black roses fade away
Nothing left but dieing pain
Time for me to be alone
By myself I am now home

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  • 20 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    This was very good, I liked how you showed the roses dieing as your love dieing it was very creative indeed.

    these two lines "Time for me to be alone
    By myself I am alone" didn't really go because the two last words were the same. maybe change one line not sure which lol.

    This was well written and untill the end flowed great, well done x)

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