I look in your eyes
And still feel the pain
I wasn't a winner
In your little game.
i love that! very good! keep up the good work!

Wow, that was also sad, i can tell you've bben trough a rough time :|

the flow was great and i enjoyed reading your poem :]

Short and sweet...and sad...it shows true emotion...I think this is relatable to many as well...especially the part about not being the person he wanted, but you can't change yourself...

Hope things are going alright for you ;)

xxx

I agree, this poem shows your emotions well.
short but sweet, with great flow.
keep up the good work.
4/5

This was my fav so far5/5

I liked this poem very much adside from the third stanza i think that one needs more work but other then that its brilliatn 5/5 for sure

I love all of your poems so much. your an awesome author

Okay this one made my heart do somersaults as this is exactly wat i'm going thru. I hate being only his 'friend' tho. But good job :)
luv jess xoxoxoxo

Hey! that was great! i think alot of girls could relate there! *5/5*
xx

So beautiful and sad, keep writing.
I love the last stanza.
5/5