it's so tragic, but in a way sweat at the same time. very good! keep it up.

Omg, this is really sad :|
the flow was fantastic and the poem was well written but so sad :|

x)

Aww...nicely done...every girl deserves a man that'll treat her right...he will come eventually... that's the trouble, the girl still feels like she loves him even if he was bad for her and all...

xxx

Ahh! this poem was so good..it brought tears to my eyes. It had such a good flow. You are very talented. Keep up the good work...
I think u'd like some of my poems so if u can check em out!~Rach

A tragic but sweet poem. I loved it!

This was kinda cliched(no clue how to spell that )...but it was still cute and sweet good poem

I loved this i know what this is like SO much great job really thi sis one of my favorite poems from you i really liked this one!!!!!5/5

Aw! so sweet

Wow this is my fav. i feel like this about 1 of my friends u have serious talent dont give it up 5/5

Another beautiful poem. This one i can totally relate too. job well done,
luv jess xoxoxoxo
ps- cud u please check out my poems