Certainly something I can relate to, as many can relate to I'm sure. It's true...so many things left unsaid, and often things that need to be said. I like it, the repetition works nicely, good flow. It's vague enough so that people can put themselves into it easily, thinking of the things they leave unsaid...

Thank you for the comment. I love hearing people's thoughts...I'm glad you like the poem :)

xxx

Really nice poem...the flow was great!

This question replays it's self over and over again
every second of everyday through my thoughts and hopes.
my life is one big trail of regrets and what ifs,
they wear you down after a while.

and thats why i enjoyed reading this one
i love the way i can find something in each one of your poem where i can relate to it on my own level
it takes true talent to produce such amazing universal poetry.

**smile**