Isabel's Sonnet

by Hans Fausto   Aug 18, 2005


Within the ocean of my lasting love
I live in joy whenever you’re around
I give you all I have and all I love
So that my love will be forever bound

The sands of time will never stop for me
But surely I will always stop for you
To hug you, kiss you, love you with glee
Because you are my only one and true

The starry night reflects the oceans glare
Like how I would be showing love to you
My love which is exploding like a flare
My love which is forever all for you

Forever will I be right by your side
The waves of love forever we will ride

-Isabel’s HW Shakespearean sonnet of wierdness…*sigh…-
That explains the title….hehe

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  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    That was nice, a couple in love...sweet.
    It had a nice feeling to it.

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    Okay I don't know what is wrong with this i think it is perhaps the last line but something throughouit the poem seemed weird the only thing i can point out is the last line 2nd stanza...very odd...

    anyhow besides that small feeling of something being off, good job

    4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow awsome poem. very well written. I loved it. keep up the good work, and thanks for commenting on my poem.

    ~ItalianStallion A.K.A. Joe~

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