Grayscale

by edsel   Aug 18, 2005


My love how long have you been crushing me, twisting my vulnerable soul in utmost disfigurement?
how long have you been tearing me apart, like i was your midnight popcorn, grinded between your sacred molars?
i'd been trying to imitate Eros, trying to shoot you with my love potion arrow, still you evaded every painfull shot like you were some attic cat
you had eyes that scorch my very soul, they look and they command, and i submit, and you my love, my queen, my enslaving queen, become my goddess
the contours of your face become the path upon which my hungry spirit run naked and
roses comes out of your lithe mouth when you speak and its torns, in my heart, burry deep
crucify me then my sweet painfull goddess, for there is no where in the world that i would rather be, other than the punishing walls of being without you...
how long..
how far..
it wouldn\'t matter..
nothing matters..
but YOU.

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  • 15 years ago

    by RoseBlood

    Yes, I really like love poems, especially this one. Thank you for suggesting that I read it.
    It has very twisted emotions, the writer is hurt, and in a lot of pain, but his world, wouldn't make sence without his ''goddess''.
    Good work. I realy enjoyed reading it. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Interesting...nicely done... keep on writing ;)

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by babyblue

    I like it and good job..baby angel

  • 18 years ago

    by juggalette_4_life

    It's really sad and good i like it

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenTessa

    That a great poem, good work, keep it up
    *Tessa*