My love

by Godoftheblackflame   Aug 18, 2005


You said u liked me
i said the same back
you said you wanted to be closer
i gladly said yes and then it started

you said nothing
and i didn't either
you waited for something to happen
shyness came in and i couldn't do anything

you said it was over
i sadly agreed
you took another guy
and my love for you grew

after a while you were left with no one
and i was there with your best friend
i helped you up when you were down
and you did the same for me

you had shown a side of u i didn't know
and with my girl right next to you....i told you i still loved you
you told me you were speechless
and at that moment i realized what i had done

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  • 18 years ago

    by *~* kelsey

    Hey. that was super awesome! i loved it. i really liked the ending. it was awesome. and you write from the heart. which is good. it just makes you poetry ten times better. i love it. keep it up! 5/5~

    kelsey
    xoxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by ZOMGEMO

    Hey... that was a great poem... it had alot of feeling and emotion... keep up the good work... and if you have time, could you check some of mine out... thanks in advace...

    Stay Strong ^_^

    *..KimiC..* XxXo0oXxX

  • 18 years ago

    by FlowerThatDied

    Awww lovely poem, its truthful and bold, it has good morals and shows remorse, Nice work I want to hear what happened next xxx Please take a look at a few of mine

  • 18 years ago

    by NICOLE

    Thank u and i really like your poem

  • 18 years ago

    by SEAN

    Greaat poem

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