What if..

by Jeff   Aug 18, 2005


What if one day i lost my sense of sight, would u hold my hands and guide me through?
What if one day i lost my sense of touch, would u hug me tight and caress me gently?
What if one day i lost my sense of smell, would u wear my favourite perfume and send me flowers?

Sometimes when u use ur heart to feel, u'll notice that things beside us are wonderful..

Hey people give me some comments.. and if possible, can help me continue on with this poem? There are 5 senses.. :)

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  • 13 years ago

    by Ankita Chobey

    What if someday I lose my sense of hearing.. would you drwa the world in front of me, we had always desired..

    What if someday I lose my sense of taste..would you kiss me.. and make me feel right...

    What if someday I lose my sense of being alive.. would you be my life and teach me to live...

    :))

  • 14 years ago

    by Molly Beth Dundas

    If one day i lost my sense of sound, would you whisper softly what ive been longing to hear ... s'all i got.

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    How about what if I lost my sense of hearing would you play my favourite music or sing me love songs lol all I can think of.

    I like the way this piece is heading :) 5/5, Em

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