I love u

by hm   Aug 20, 2005


All i do is receive pain
wishing not 2 receive it again
but 2 night theres a change
coz my heart is thumping like a rage
I'm sick of the way u treater me
but 2 night I'm setting my anger free
I'm caming out of this cage
I'm holding this knife
thinking what fun i will have 2 night
i Sharpe theses edges
then i c Ur face and u tell me plz don't
I LOVE U is what she screams
she thinks its 4 me
i whisper I LOVE U
but this knife is 4 u

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  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Go girl i loved this poem!

    i loved the ending
    "this knife is 4 u"

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥•oOo MaDdiSoN ♥•oOo[[i LuV JoSiE]]

    My babi josie! whats this about? i hope that this isn't about me? i don't want me 2 be the reason that u use the knife!!! i luv u wif all my heart, and i will always b here 4 u....i no u believe that people just come and go, and u always get hurt, but huni, im not that type of person, i will stay here thru everything, i will do the best i can 2 help u get thru coz i love u and without u i wouldnt b here, u make my life so much better i widh u could see that....

    luv u always Maddy xxx p.s call me hun, we gotta catch up mwahzz

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child

    Sweet! man, your poem is soo cool! i love the twist at the end!

    swwetly twisted...

    keep it up!
    evil grins from AsH

  • 18 years ago

    by hm

    Hey ppl these are my poems about my lyf hope u like them i would love 2 no what u think so plz write a comment

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