Umm well it was ok. Probably just personal prefrance cause i dont usually comment on love poems cause i dont like them but it was ok. lol

That is really touching, good job! The flow was pretty good, but it seemed to bounce a bit.

I really like this. So true hunnie! Keep up the great work!

Much Love
~*hAiLy*~

Nice job i am sorry that happend to you 2 guys can be really big @$$holes
you know keep it up 5/5

It was rlly gd hun xox

This poem is really good it has good style about how cruel guys can be

Aww sorry that had to happen, once again though I know how it is, not wanting to talk to anyone and ya, and being broken up cuz they're scared of getting their heart broken, so they break yours instead. anwayz a 5/5 for sure!

Lol i like how you put the guys name, anyways still good.

You & your cousin did a good job.. sounded like the two people were jus not fate.. but oh well.. theres a reason for everything to happen. Nice poem! 5/5 xox take care xox