Nightmare

by jello   Aug 21, 2005


You wake up in a place you’ve been before
You really don’t know where it is
You see bodies laying on the ground
Blood stained
You start to walk aimlessly
You keep walking until it starts to go black
You get kind of nervous
Suddenly a guy appears in front of you
He has an evil smile
He’s carrying a knife
You try to run
But you don’t move
You can’t move
He starts to walk toward you
And starts to raise his knife
Suddenly you wake up
Screaming
This dream haunts you
It will haunt you tell
It actually comes true

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  • 18 years ago

    by Heather Prior

    I like the idea of it. I think that it would be better if you put it into first person and try making it flow better. keep writing though.