This carries an excellent flow. The words are meaningful and rich, giving the verses an extravagent air.

Very well thought out, deep. A pleasing read.

Wow! amazing poem.. please do more work soon, i love this!! 5/5 great work!!

That was an excellent poem! Bravismo!

-Taylor

Poems like this one really touches my heart

Woa thats powerful it reminds me of one by a famous poet.....REALLY good!

Burning to truth in raging fire.
good line, adds emotion.
wow, this reminds me of a story I read that was true, and yeah, I wont go into that cause it's sorta in belief, (not religious) but yeah, this poem is short but effective, nice job, I enjoyed it! 5/5

Hey, thanks for your comment on my poem, i really appreciate it.
I loved this, it's really powerful, you've put a lot of emotion and good ideas into a fairly short poem. Well Done !!!
xxx cici xxx

Dark and very well put together...I love it!

WOW! this poem is AWESOME! You have great imagry in your writing! It is very darkand very beautifull!!! I love it! (: keep writitng

I love reading ur stuff. Thanx for the comment on mine. It really means alot. I hope you know ur on my favorite list, I read ur poems all the time. Excellent write, I really enjoyed this one! ~KT

You're poems are great girl. They are deep reaching and well written. I would like to see what you could do with a love, or friendship poem someday.
Tim

I really enjoyed this poem. It's kind of mysterious, which is what I guess you were going for here. I loved this line:
"And as the petals of the rose in her hand die;
Her ghost stands over her body to cry."

It paints such a clear picture n your mind. I can see the petal dying in her little hand. Very nice writing. You're very talented.

That was absolutly amazing! i wuv it!!!!! keep writing and mayb check out some of mine, kays? thnx

*shadaow*

Wow, this is really sad!!! i hiope that you never have or have to deal with something like this in your life...
amanda

Awww that was so sad! Yet had so much depth and meaning to it. So beautiful! You have such a way with words; your flow and vocab are impecable! My fav part was:

"A child lays innocent in forgotten plea.
A soul is gone for wolves to feed"

That was so saddening, yet had so much feeling. Never ever ever ever stop writing....or..or...i'll come after you! muahahhaha! LOL jk! But really you have talent that others can only dream of having. Keep it up! Byez! =D
~Luvz~
~Chica~
xoxo

Omg...another awesome poem! It's soooo beautiful and some lines are really cute but the whole poem's so sad! Keep on writing, k!!!