From The Knife To The Gun

by Unforgiven Retniap doolb   Aug 22, 2005


Take me away,
Before I begin to cry,
Kill me now,
For all I want is to die

Sooner or later,
I'm not going to run,
and instead of the knife,
I'll reach for the gun.

When i pass a cemetery,
I envy the dead,
And think how great it would be,
If I put a bullet through my head.

I give up,
I no longer wish to be saved,
All I want is for in that stone,
My name and two dates to be engraved.

I no longer trust in god,
For all he gave me was false hope,
And that so called truth,
Can no longer help me cope.

This is it
So goodbye everyone,
In this life I am no longer,
*as she lifts the gun*

wrote this off the top of my head. And to let you know suicide thoughts have been plagueing me for a while and i'm trying to have hope but with all the people in my life and the ones i need most not truely with me i don't know what to do and the eternal night right now is looking so bright.

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  • 18 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    Nice poem hun bt dont think of it it aint worth it in the end xox

  • 18 years ago

    by ButterflyKisses_xo

    This is sad..but a good poem. and dont kill yourself..eventually things will get better..if u ever need sum1 to talk to my email is undiscovered_loser@hotmail.com

    STAY STRONG AND HANG IN THERE!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by husbandlover

    AWW.PLZ DONT KILL YOURSELF.UR A GREAT POEM WRITER.WE NEED THOSE.MAYBE SOMEDAY IN THE FUTURE YOU WILL BECOME FAMOUS FOT THEM.REALLY,DONT DO IT.BY THE WAY THE POEM WAS GREAT.5/5 IF U WANT TO TALK MY EMAIL IS SOMBERFAERIE06@AOL.COM

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiffany

    Eternal night is alluring, and sometimes so is the touch of the blade. I can be here to talk.. if you get sad.. I'm always willing to listen, and to share experiences. Keep writing though, writing has helped me the most, well second to cutting. But i'm over cutting now I believe.

  • 18 years ago

    by chris johnson

    Wow, that was nice!!!!!!! how long you been writing?

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