Beautifully Demonic Part 1: Intro

by Renee   Aug 25, 2005


-*-This is a series about a girl, who in the midst of finding herself, comes to a realization of a haunting memory, which turns into her inner demon so to speak.-*-

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She's beautifully radiant,
with long flowing hair.
They all say she's magnificent,
but no, they wouldn't dare.

because there's an air about her,
some kind of shield
she won't let them in,
they say she'll never feel.

she's so damn microscopic,
in this big, cold world.
But she's just fine with it,
she loves being "that girl"

They continue pointing fingers
and wonder where her parents went wrong
little do they know,
all of what "that girl" has known all along.

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-*- Just an intro, so you can get to know the main character. Sorry if its shitty, hopefully the rest will be better.-*-

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    COONAY! I like this! I LOVE IT ACTUALLY....You decribed her so well. So well that I pictured a couple of people I went to school with...lol The only thing is you left me hanging. "little do they know,
    all of what "that girl" has known all along." It doesn't seem to be a complete thought...Maybe you were going for an ending like this... to have the reader wandering how ever I think that is a little too broad....anyhoo...I did like it...now I'm off to read the other one...

  • 18 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    It isn't shitty, whoever rated it a 3 is a meanie. :-). It's a great intro and it has me incredibly excited for the rest! Hurry! Haha. Love you hun, take care and post soon. :-). *hugs*

    Love always,
    Mortie.xxxx