Excellent poem, my friend...

I have not the time, nor the strength to review it now, as it is 09.31 am, and I have to go to sleep, but I will look deeper into it later..

peace

This was beautiful. Truly love the whole poem but the last stanza...truly beautiful....

hugs, love, Ann

Congrats...for winning the weekly poetry contest...well deserved with this beautiful poem...

hugs, love, Ann

Your use of diction and imagery in this piece leave me captivated. Very good use of the form too, it’s good to see something different. Fantastic, this poem deserves the front page, no question about it. Believe me it’s rare I do this but 5/5!!

Congratulations Steve, This poem is amazingly written. Beautiful wording, I love reading all the different styles; you’re a man of great talent. Take Care! Brooke~

This poem as outstanding Steven. I loved it. The imagery was magnificent and the flow was perfect. Great job, Steven. I really enjoyed it:)

Beautiful job as always. I look forward to reading more... Congrats on winning! keep up the good work.

*Net Hugs And Kisses*! Steve You Won Oh My God I'm So Proud Of You :) xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Garden of Eden.. do you happen to listen to Guns N` Roses at all?

.. Anyway, very nice poem. The title caught my eye because it's a song name. :)

Wow, this poem was soooo wonderful...
the only word to decribe it is:
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I love nature and this poem makes all its wonder come true. Wonderfully done=)

Wow Your very talented and well done on conquering a very hard topic...
love s0ph

Wow. love the poem. check out some of mine when ya get the chance

Hey I loved your poem, you're like one of the only people who actually has original turns of phrase and rich vocabulary (or like poeple like to call them: big words). I had no idea my kick ass country made up that form of poetry. hehehe

Smooth

Wondeful Steve, another great job!!!

Wonderfull Love it

Love it

Wow i love your poem

Steven,

What a lovely work of art! The rigid structure made the poem verily efficient, and the diction was excellent. You certainly are talented, and I enjoy the way in which you experiment with different forms of poetry. In any case, this is a most fantastic poem. Well done!

Great Poem. Good To Read

But Really I think we should forget about all the stanzas an Crap.
Read for the enjoyment.
Go watch the Movie Dead Poet Society.
March to the beat of your own Drum