So now, I'm through

by M MEM   Aug 26, 2005


I am sick of this life
I am sick of you
Nothings ever worth it
So now,
I'm through.

I can't stand the remarks
I can't stand you
Regretting ever trying
So now,
I'm through

I won't try any longer
I won't live any longer
I won't listen to you criticize my life any longer
I'm not gonna put up with this shit
I'm not gonna try to live
All I'm gonna do is take the gun
And put the bullet through my brain

So now you see,
I am really through

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  • 18 years ago

    by Vegetable

    Oo such emotion! good job. At the end though, the flow is a little awkward. Maybe if you work on that this poem could get even better. ( and you should try jumping in a pile of leaves-it's great fun)

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    Wow....
    short and to the point!

    Jacs
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    I'm so sorry you feel this way.... I hope you feel better soon and you wouldnt scare your friends away. If they were real friends they would stick by you and try to support you.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristen

    Hey,
    talk to me plz i kno how it feels
    thanks,
    kristen
    email me @ princess1218903@aol.com

  • 18 years ago

    by Drew Gold

    All I'm gonna do is take the gun
    And put the bullet through my brain

    So now you see,
    I am really through

    when reading these last lines, a visual of a hole in ur head came to mind(imagine that) but ur choice of words sparked an idea..

    so now you see,
    what ran thru my head,
    everyday,
    with you.
    the bullet in me
    that finally came out
    now you see through..

    get where im goin? assimilating visuals and ideas like that strengthens ur poems.. i dunn0 if that makes sense or anything, but it was just a thought.. good work anyway..

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