The searing kiss

by Freakfall   Aug 27, 2005


Hope for today
fades away
turn to the blade
theres no other way
the searing kiss
of the razors bliss
makes me feel
like I'm still real
i can't survive
I'm slowly dying
and I'm still crying
death is near
i can feel him here
he's getting closer
he's right behind me
I'm just waiting for
him to get this over
so i can take my last breath
before i slip over into death.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Meg Wilson

    That poem was deep...5/5...

  • 18 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Oh and james

  • 18 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Hey i just wanted to tell u that i made it through the hurricane...i had to leave yesterday to come to georgia, bcuz we couldnt stand it without power and water any longer....thankz for checking up on me!....im glad i can finally get bck on here! i missed the computer and all my friends...oh and power and water lol.

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Good poem. Not very strong in the middle with the flow but overall very good.
    ~FotF

  • 18 years ago

    by BloodShotEyes

    Good poem.

    *Blood Shot Eyes*

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