So lonely in my thoughts

I liked this part most "No-one to listen,
I’m just a ghost" How often am I not in that position... Well, great job anyway!

Wow, great poem! I hope you're okay, and I hope you find somebody! I'm sorry you feel this way. You really did a great job.

.:*-*Krissy*-*:.

Aww dont be lonley! even if ya dont know it someone out there loves ya!! it was great, and i know how you feel, the poem overall was a little shaky at points but the last stanza was awesome. i gave it a 5/5

Oh dear sorry you feel so lonely, I am sure so many people would be happy to give you a cuddle and try to make everything better, you expressed your emotions well and made the poem interesting, its a shame this is how you feel, I hope that you feel better soon

My favourite stanza was this one
"All I want is love,
I want a small cuddle,
Told I’ll be alright,
But I’m in a muddle"

I hope you get that cuddle soon..

take care
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These are very good ideas, i think it could've flowed a little better, but it works by itself.