Still untitled..

by Hans Fausto   Aug 28, 2005


Is it wrong to love you?
If yes tell me so…
For I want to be with you
Even if it disrupts the flow

You’re like a distant star
Not given what’s due
But for me, nothing’s far
Not the moon, the star or even you

Ill shield you with my embrace
From the fears you fear so much
For your pain, ill take your place
So you won’t hurt much

I shall take every blow
From the fists of suffering and pain
Ill even go to the lowest of the low
Just to see you smile again

And still I keep dreaming….
Dreaming of what’s not to come true
I just hope it’s a lie
So that I don’t need to dream of you

~still untitled...haha...i would appreciate it if u can help me make one:D~

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  • 18 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    Even if it disrupts the flow
    this really doesn't seem to go here.
    i like how you describe the distant star, it really visualizes things nicely. good job, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Great write thx for r/c on mine
    love always

    Natalie