Breakdown

by BrokenMisery   Aug 28, 2005


Dancing with the demons inside my head,
Playing the tunes of bones instead,
Crying is the harmony, blood is the taste,
Marking the skin in Heavens disgrace.

Don’t watch me as I fall apart.
I played the tune that lost my heart,
Darkening the soul to charcoal from fire,
Feeding the poison of Hell’s desire.
I marked the skin [slice and dice]
I did the sin [paid the price]
And now I’m here on the ground;
Falling apart as I breakdown.

Swallowing the pills to drown the sorrow;
Wishing for the future of no tomorrow.
The nights drag longer for forever is here;
Struggle as demons pull me near.

Don’t watch me as I fall apart.
I played the tune that lost my heart,
Darkening the soul to charcoal from fire,
Feeding the poison of Hell’s desire.
I marked the skin [slice and dice]
I did the sin [paid the price]
And now I’m here on the ground;
Falling apart as I breakdown.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    Excellent poem. GREAT!! 5/5! wonderful!

    well expressed!

    i like how you repeated the 2nd and 4th stanza.

    i feel the exact same way... most days, i just swallow a bunch of pills, hoping to die, but it just doesn't do a thing... atleast not yet.

    feel free to read my poems. hopefully, they will be of help. i have bipolar disorder-a mood disorder, so at times, it can be tough. i know how you feel... maybe not exactly--since, no one is perfect.

    but, anyway, if you ever need anyone to listen, i will always be here for you. alright?

    big hugs,

    michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by PeachiKeen

    Wow.. thats amazing..

  • 18 years ago

    by Keili

    Wow! that's almost all i can say. you have such talent, i sincerly hope you realize that. this iss an awesome poem. i haven't read any of your others but if this is "not your best" then i envy you even more than i had thught

    Silvershade
    a.k.a. Tanya
    4 ever & 4 always

  • 18 years ago

    by PoeticMystery

    Your poem was very intriguing. I enjoyed reading it. Very creative and well-written.

    Love,
    Nana

  • 18 years ago

    by Amy

    Omfg kt that was fantastic! seriously i reakon ur best. it was soo awsum. that was seriously gr8! talk soon. luv ya heapz. amy

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