The singing Insane

by Zer0riginZ   Aug 29, 2005



Oh my mind is a broken tool,
who am I? Am I a fool?

my minds gears will spin,
but my thought will leak.

The hole I'm in,
begins to reek...

Sanity is what I want,
its all I seek!

Do you, do you,
believe me?

When I say I'm not true!

We don't now where we are,
until we we aren't there no more...

People walk by and look at me,
I want to know what is it they see?

I lost control,
long ago...

No one can help me regain,
they all know of my pain...

No one wants to help me,
to let me suffer they all agree...

My mind waits in repairs,
while everyone stands and stares...

Give your hand,
and I would take it...

No one does,
they think I'll break it...

Listen to my ballad,
ballad of the insane...

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  • 20 years ago

    by Solace

    This is defiantly one of my favorites written by you. Deserves nothing less than a 5/5.

    Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 20 years ago

    by swordplay

    Thats awusome, you did a great job on it +_-

  • 20 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Hm, that was intense. ^Haha, that girl called you insane. Thats brilliant. But it does creep a bit of insanity in it. Usually when people are insane though, they say they arent over and over again to reasure themselves. That wasnt really done in your poem..so therefor its not a fact. Unless you have been withholding information about yourself!?!?! Hm..anyways, that was really well written. Good work ole' Pal.

    -Jennifer.

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