My poem on child abuse (Must say my emotions!)

by Avrii Monrielle   Aug 29, 2005


I hate it,okay?
I just DO!
I wish all you abusers would just QUIT your jobs!
You hurt innocent people like me
And then say some stupid excuse!
Theres no excuse for what you do!
I wish I could use all my anger against you!
Your acts were the reasons I wanted to die,
Your decisions made me have the fate to which I cried
If only you'd stop,but you know you love it!
Killing your victims painfully,slowly...
To your amusement!
One day you'll pay... you will...
Dearly...
For each life you did kill...
One day you will die in the most horrible torturous tomb,
Darker than the deepest pits of your own mother's womb...
THE PAIN OF DEMONIC EMBRACES OF WHICH YOU'VE GIVEN ME,
I SHALL KILL YOUR LIES

DEATH THE PAINT OF YOUR SOUL,YOUR SPIRITS DOWN HILLS ROLL

YOU HORRIBLE ABUSERS WILL DIE,
EACH WHIP-LASH YOUR CRY

GOODBYE!

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  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Bravo to that!

    "For each life you did kill..."

    I just think it could be good to add something about the killing inside as well as out...because many are dying internally but not yet physically. I'm sorry if/that you have to go through horrible treatment from any abusers. But I love the poem! Strong voice, releashed anger, and those abusers certainly deserve it.

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Weeping Wolf

    Wow rainy..i reallly felt ur anger there, good one, i feel the same way about those ***holes...btw, not all my poems r fantasy...they might just be true.;)) lol, and about ur friend cris, whats his ID? cuz i probably wont kno who he is if he ever contacts me....iono lol, well ttyl xxxxxxxx