My pleasure and my pain

by XxTeArSxX17   Aug 30, 2005


MY PLEASURE AND MY PAIN

No one understands my pleasure,
No one understands my pain
And when I am lonely,
And Darkness comes around the thought,
Of you brings me out

And when everything falls down around me,
And everything seems so far gone,
That I won’t make it out, I think of you.

Everything I've try-ed but with out you,
I am not sure I’ll make it through,
Every inch Of me is in love with you,
With you I am not so blue.

With you everything seem ok because,
Everything no one understood,
Was everything about me you could.

Behind my eyes you seen me and everything I am,
You were the one to heal my pain,
And gave me pleaser in loves little game
You saved me form everything,
You saved me from my self.

(C) Written By ~Ashleigh~
8/30/2005

i am not sure what part under love it should be you have and idea could you let me know oh yeah and if you comment i be sure to do the same.

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  • WOW...is all i have to say about this one...very impressive. great job. never give up on love i know u r in love.

  • 18 years ago

    by ~DyingBlackRose~

    Great job. I can relate. keep up the wonderful work.

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ Dark Princess ღ

    WOW! JUST AMAZING!
    5.5 DEFENITELY!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by ~DyingBlackRose~

    Great job. keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by SweetSuicide

    Hi im new..read your poem..really great work..but can you plz comment on my work..and vote..Thanks